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Nightmare in 483
Written By Tokio Designs [Tokiogirl93]

Chapter 1.

“Tom!” yelled Bill Kaulitz who was sleeping in his bed. It was about 12 midnight and he was caught in yet another nightmare. Inside his mind images played of something horrible happening but for a reason that he did not know, he could not do anything to stop it. No matter how loud he would scream or how hard he tried to move he couldn't. The next thing he knew he began screaming out for his old twin brother Tom's name.

In the room next door Tom was asleep but woke up quickly when he heard Bill's screams. He got out of bed and ran to Bill's side. When he reached him, Bill was tossing and turning with sweat pouring down his forehead and tears down his cheeks. It took Tom a few times to get Bill to stop tossing and turning. Tom put his hands on Bills shoulders and began to gently shake him in a attempt to get him to wake up. “Bill, Bill wake up! You are having a nightmare!” he shouted “Bill! It is me, Tom”. Bill's eyes shot open and he sprang up from under his sheets.  He was shivering from a cold sweat. He turned and saw Tom standing by his bed. He wrapped his arms around Tom's waist and began to sob into his brothers shirt. “Oh Tom it was horrible...I..saw awful” he was cut off by Tom's comforting voice.
“shh it's ok we don't have to talk about it.” It was these types of moments that sometimes Tom feel more like a father then a twin brother to Bill.

After about 10 minutes when Tom was completely sure that Bill was fast asleep he got Bill situated in his bed again and then left the room. When Tom walked into the hallway he found Gustav and Georg sitting on the floor with the heads leaned against the wall. They looked up when the heard Tom come in. “We heard Bill screaming.” said Gustav “What happened?”
“He just had a nightmare, no big deal.” replied Tom as he tried to go back to his room but he was stopped by Georg. “This is the third one this week.” said Georg. “He also had two last week. I don't know about you but I do think that there is something wrong.”
Tom was really tired so the littlest thing could make him angry. He could feel his face beginning to get red and anger was building up inside of him. He did his best though to keep it inside of him and turned around and spoke to Georg in a stern voice. “He has just been working himself to hard these days. In case you have no noticed, we have a deadline to begin working on a new album next week and Bill has been working really hard on getting all the new songs written.” Georg wanted to believe but there was just something inside of him that was telling him not to. He just walked away saying “I hope you are right.” Tom was really losing his temper this time he yelled back before Georg could reach his room. “I'm his twin brother aren't I!” Georg did not respond. Tom turned to Gustav who was behind him. “Look I'm not saying I agree with what Georg said.” said Gustav “But I do agree with what you said I really think that Bill is working himself to hard. I really think that Bill should stay here and work on songs instead of going to that interview tomorrow.” Tom  did not want to agree with Gustav but he know that Gustav was right. He nodded his head and went back to bed.

The next mourning Bill, Georg, and Gustav all sat around a table eating breakfast. Tom lied and asked that he be able to just get a little bit of extra sleep but really he was trying to come up with a excuse that would convince Bill to stay behind and work on new song's. Back the breakfast table Bill was not eating but just playing with his food. Georg and Gustav could see that he was obviously still upset about last night. “So Bill” said Gustav breaking the silence that filled the room. “That was some dream you were having last night.”
“You heard me?” asked Bill
“No I got up to go get a drink of water and I ran and to Tom and he told me.” Lied Gustav
“uhhh Speaking of Tom.” said Georg turning the conversation around at just the right moment. “Where is he?
“He was still asleep when I went into his room.” replied Bill “He wanted to sleep in a extra hour so I let him. Said I would cover for if something happened.”
“Oh I see finally repaying him, I see.”
“Repaying him for what?”
“All those times that Tom covered for you when you slept in.”
“Shut up!” said Bill throwing a piece of bread at Georg
Georg dodged it and fired back
“Hey” said Bill as he was hit with the flying food, it landed in his hair. Everyone close to Bill knew that nothing ever touched his hair. “Oh it's on now!” he said picking up more food and throwing it.
The next thing Gustav knew he was caught in the middle of a all out food fight between Georg and Bill. It lasted for about 5 minutes before being interrupted by Tom. “What is going on in here?”
“Georg was picking on me!!!” yelled Bill who was standing on top of a chair with a box of cereal in his hand and throwing its contents at Georg.
“I was not!!!” said Georg from behind another chair.
“I don't even want to know.” said Tom as he made his way to the table dodging flying food. He looked at Gustav who was eating what was left on his plate ignoring the confrontation around him. “Were you able to save any food before it became a weapon of mass destruction?”
“There is still some left in the kitchen.” said Gustav getting up from his chair .

The two went in to the kitchen. Gustav lead Tom to the extra food and Tom began getting what he wanted.  “It amazes me.” said  Gustav
“What, the fact that two grown men can still get into silly quarrels like that.” stated Tom
“No but you do have point. What I'm saying is that like Bill looking at him now you would never suspect that he was upset about what happened last night.”
“Well thats Bill for you always so unpredictable.”
Gustav nodded his head in agreement.
“ are...right” stamerd Tom he began to get dizzy. “he ......”
Tom fainted to the floor bringing the plate that was with him crashing down. Gustav ran to Tom's side and checked his pulse. Bill and Georg heard the plate fall and came running into the kitchen. “What happened?” said Georg
“Tom!” Bill yelled when he saw his brother in a heap on the floor. Bill ran over and scooped Tom up in his arms.
“Be careful!” warned Gustav
“What happen to him!?!” said Bill in a panic
“I don't know.” replied Gustav “He was fine one moment and the next he passed out!”
“Get him to the sofa.” said Georg
Georg being the strongest of the four carried Tom to the sofa. The laid him on it and Bill sat on the floor in tears next to him. He felt Gustav's comforting hand on his shoulder.
“His pulse is normal, and he does not have a fever.” said Georg
“Then what the hell is going!” demanded Bill
“Calm down Bill.” said Gustav “It's probably some type of mourning sickness.”
“Pregnant Women get mourning sickness and I really don't think Tom is any of those two.”
Georg looked at the clock and saw that it was getting late and that they really needed to leave for a interview with BRAVO. It was obvious that Tom was not in any condition to go. “Look Bill I need you to stay with Tom today!” said Georg “Me and Gustav will go to the interview.”

Bill nodded in agreement. Georg grabbed Gustav and the two went upstairs to get ready. Bill sat on the floor next to Tom on the sofa holding his hand. “Please be ok Tom.” Whispered a very scared Bill.
I posted this on my myspace fansite before now i'm posting it here
if you like it let me know and i will post more chapters
i'm not a professional writer! don't get mad and flame me because of errors in the text.
it is my first fanfiction so be nice!
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AzureKate Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
i luv it. im commentin cuz i realize i not comment yet :)
Writer4Ever95 Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2008
“Georg was picking on me!!!” yelled Bill who was standing on top of a chair with a box of cereal in his hand and throwing its contents at Georg.

Haha I love that! I can just imagine Bill standing on a chain and taking delicate handfuls and throwing them at Georg.
I like it so far.
joona-smiles Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2008
love it! :D
PlainWhiteTsfan Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2008   Traditional Artist
the food fight was my favorite part!
Christina123029 Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2008
"Georg was picking on me!!" that slayed me.:D
draumstafur Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2008  Professional Digital Artist
I love the story so far...I just can't seem to get out of it! I'm still putting the little pieces and clues in my head together to figure out what's going to happen!
DarkWolf-Kurama Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2008  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
twas' adorable.
angelic-hell-raiser Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2008

I just recently discovered and became a Tokio Hotel fan and i must say this is a very nice story so far. Please, continue! I must know what happens to Tomi! :(

It's alright that there is errors in it. Everyone makes mistakes. ^^
tokiogirl93 Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2008
Welcome to the world of Tokio Fans
and thank you so much
1XxBlackxGuitarxX1 Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2008
that is really good

amazing :)
tokiogirl93 Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2008
thank you so much!
1XxBlackxGuitarxX1 Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2008
no problem :hug:
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